The Miracle of Microfinance? Evidence from a Randomized Evaluation
2015 · paper · Economics
A randomized evaluation of opening microfinance branches in half of 104 Hyderabad slums. Borrowing rose, but average consumption, business profits and development outcomes such as health, education and women's empowerment showed no change, apart from higher profits at the top.
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Substance The endline-2 MFI borrowing rate in treatment is given three ways: the introduction says "not significantly different (38.5% in treatment and 33% in control)", Section 2.4 says "33.1% ... in the former control slums, and 33.7% in the treatment slums", and footnote 30 says "The takeup rate is 42% in treatment areas and 33% percent in control areas".
- p. 5 Introduction, last line
was not significantly different (38.5% in
- p. 6 Introduction, first line
treatment and 33% in control)
- p. 15 Section 2.4
33.1% of households had borrowed from an MFI in the former control slums, and 33.7% in the treatment slums
- p. 45 Table 3 Panel B col 1
0.0058
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Judge's note: Table 3 Panel B col 1 (p45 upright) gives control mean 0.33 and treatment coefficient 0.0058 (0.030), not significant, which fits 33.7% vs 33.1%. The 38.5% (intro, p5) and 42% (fn 30, p35) treatment figures cannot be squared with that table, and a 5.5 pp gap does not sit easily with the 'not significantly different' statement in the same sentence. The conclusion text gives an overall 38%. No alternative definition is stated anywhere. Footnote 30 also prints a redundant '% percent'.
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Substance Text on p.8 says the endline-2 re-contact rate was '89.9% in the treatment group', but Table A2 Panel A prints 'Found in endline 2, in treatment 0.8889' (88.9%)
- p. 10 Section 2.2
at 89.9% in the treatment group and 90.2% in the control group
- p. 55 Table A2 Panel A
0.8889
- p. 10 Section 2.2
89.9% in the treatment group and 90.2% in the control group
- p. 55 Table A2 Panel A
Found in endline 2, in treatment 0.8889
Judge's note: Checked page 10 (printed p.8) and Table A2 on page 55. The control figure, 0.9017, matches the 90.2% in the text. The treatment figure, 0.8889, rounds to 88.9%, not 89.9%. Both refer to the same quantity, so rounding cannot account for the difference.
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Substance In a sentence comparing the 'control baseline sample (2005)' with control EL1/EL2, the text says 'Average household consumption rose from Rs. 5,485', but 5,485 is the Treatment column of Table 1; the Control value is 5,208
- p. 12 Growth between 2005 and 2010
Average household consumption rose from Rs. 5,485 to Rs. 7,662
- p. 43 Table 1, Household expenditure
5,485
- p. 12 Section 2.3
Average household consumption rose from Rs. 5,485
- p. 12 Section 2.3 Growth
Average household consumption rose from Rs. 5,485 to Rs. 7,662 in 2007
Judge's note: Table 1 (page 43) gives Household expenditure as 5,485 (Treatment) and 5,208 (Control). The pooled mean is 'just under Rs. 5350' (p.9). Elsewhere in this growth paragraph the baseline figures are control values (savings 34% = 0.34, loans 68%, businesses 24%), so 5,485 does not fit.
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Substance The text gives 'a 12 percentage point increase in the likelihood the family's house was waterproof between baseline and EL2 (68% versus 56%)', but 0.558 and 0.679 are the EL1 and EL2 control values in Table 2
- p. 12 Growth section
between baseline and EL2 (68% versus 56%)
- p. 44 Table 2, Waterproof house
0.558
- p. 44 Table 2
Waterproof house 0.558 0.679
- p. 12 Section 2.3 Growth
12 percentage point increase in the likelihood the family’s house was waterproof between baseline and EL2 (68% versus 56%)
Judge's note: Table 2 (page 44) gives Waterproof house as 0.558 (EL1) and 0.679 (EL2), a difference of 0.121. Table 1 reports no baseline waterproof figure. The comparison shown is EL1 to EL2, not baseline to EL2.
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Substance The text says 'Almost none (0.03%) had any health insurance', but Table 1 gives 0.003 in both arms, which is 0.3%
- p. 12 Section 2.3
Almost none (0.03%) had any health insurance.
- p. 43 Table 1, Household with health insurance
0.003
- p. 12 Section 2.3
Almost none (0.03%) had any health insurance
- p. 43 Table 1
Household with health insurance 0.003 0.003
Judge's note: Table 1 (page 43) shows 0.003 for both treatment and control. As a percentage that is 0.3%, so the text figure is ten times too small.
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Substance The baseline text says 'spending Rs. 550 ($54) or more on a health shock', but the Table 1 row is 'Household spent Rs. 500 on health shock', and p.11 and Table 2 use 'Rs. 500 or more'
- p. 12 Section 2.3
spending Rs. 550 ($54) or more on a health shock
- p. 43 Table 1
Household spent Rs. 500 on health shock, previous year
- p. 13 Growth section
spending Rs. 500 or more on a health shock
- p. 12 Section 2.3
spending Rs. 550 ($54) or more
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Judge's note: The same variable has a Rs. 500 threshold in Table 1, Table 2 and the p.11 text. The $54 is consistent with Rs. 550 at the paper's implied PPP rate of about 10 Rs per dollar (9,900 to $980), so reviewer note 4's 9.2 rate does not hold. Only the authors can say which threshold applies at baseline.
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Substance The growth comparison for control households says the share of households with a sick member who had to borrow 'held fairly constant: 50% at baseline to 53% at EL1 and 45% at EL2', but Table 1 gives 0.5 for treatment and 0.581 for control
- p. 13 Growth section
50% at baseline to 53% at EL1 and 45% at EL2
- p. 12 Section 2.3
50% of households who had a sick member had to borrow
- p. 43 Table 1 Panel B
0.581
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Judge's note: Table 1 Panel B (page 43): treatment 0.5, control 0.581. Table 2 gives 0.530 and 0.454, matching the EL1 and EL2 figures. The growth paragraph otherwise uses control baseline values. A pooled value would not round to 50% unless control households carried under about 6% of the weight. With 58% as the baseline the trend reads differently, so the authors should confirm.
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Substance The Mongolia (Attanasio et al. / AADFH) first stage is '48 percentage points' on p.12 and 'increase of 48%' in Table 10, but '57 percentage points higher in AADFH' on p.30
- p. 14 Section 2.4
Attanasio et al. (2011) find a much larger increase, 48 percentage points
- p. 32 Section 5
57 percentage points higher in AADFH
- p. 53 Table 10, Mongolia col 2
increase of 48% in the probability of receiving microcredit
- p. 14 Section 2.4
find a much larger increase, 48 percentage points
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Judge's note: Page 32 (printed p.30) describes 'Access to microfinance from the MFI who participated in the trials' and says the group-liability results are reported. That is the same quantity as on p.12 and in Table 10 col 2 (page 53, upright), which give 48. Nothing in the paper defines 57 as a different measure.
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Substance Conclusion (p.35): "only 38% of households borrow from an MFI" with footnote 30 "The takeup rate is 42% in treatment areas and 33% percent in control areas"; Section 2.4 and Table 3 Panel B give 33.7% vs 33.1% (treatment coefficient 0.0058 on control mean 0.33) at endline 2.
- p. 35 Conclusion and footnote 30
The takeup rate is 42% in treatment areas and 33% percent in control areas.
- p. 35 Conclusion text
38% of households borrow from an MFI
- p. 15 Section 2.4
and 33.7% in the treatment slums
- p. 35 Conclusion
only 38% of households borrow from an MFI
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Judge's note: Checked Table 3 Panel B col 1 (upright p.45): 0.0058 (0.030), control mean 0.33. Section 2.4 (p.15) gives 33.1% control and 33.7% treatment 'by the second endline survey'. Searching the text for 38%/42%/'ever borrow' found no alternative definition; the 42% on line 426 concerns businesses. So the conclusion's 38% overall and the 42% vs 33% split (a 9-point gap) do not match the reported endline-2 borrowing. Footnote 30 also has the doubled unit '33% percent'.
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Substance Table 10 India row, col 7 reports "3% for number of business started (p<0.05)", but Table 5 Panel A col 2 gives 0.016** on a control mean of 0.053 (≈30%), and Section 4.2 says "30% more business were created in treatment than in comparison areas".
- p. 53 Table 10 India row col 7
3% for number of business started (p<0.05)
- p. 24 Section 4.2
30% more business were created in treatment than in comparison areas
- p. 47 Table 5 Panel A col 2
0.016**
- p. 24 Section 4.2
(30% more business were created in treatment than in comparison areas)
Judge's note: Table 10 note (2) says India effect sizes are percentages of endline control group means. Table 5 Panel A col 2 shows Treatment 0.016** and Mean in control 0.053 (p047 upright image). That is a 30% effect, matching the text on p24 (5.3 vs 6.9 per 100 households, 30% more). The printed 3% looks like a dropped digit.
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Substance Table 2 Panel A, 'Household is renter': EL1 0.089, EL2 0.087, but Difference (EL2-EL1) is printed as 0.002 (positive) rather than about -0.002.
- p. 44 Table 2 Panel A, Household is renter
Household is renter 0.089 0.087 0.002
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Judge's note: In the p.44 image, nearly every other row's column 3 equals col 2 minus col 1 to within 0.001 (e.g. household size, TV, cell phone, income, loans). Rounding cannot turn 0.087-0.089 positive. Only the authors can say whether the sign or the levels are wrong.
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Substance Table 10 India row, col 3 (consumption per capita) reads "positive insig (endline 1 and 2)", but Table 4 Panel B col 1 gives an endline 2 total per capita consumption effect of -48.3 (51.4).
- p. 53 Table 10, India col 3
positive insig (endline 1 and 2)
- p. 46 Table 4 Panel B col 1
-48.3
- p. 53
postivie, insig, endline 1;
Judge's note: Table 4 (p46 upright) shows Panel A col 1 = 10.1 (positive) and Panel B col 1 = -48.3 (negative). Section 4.1 says endline 2 effects on total and non-durable spending are 'negative with t-statistics around 1'. The Table 10 col 4 entry (negative, both endlines) is consistent with Table 4, but col 3 is not, for endline 2. The 'postivie' spelling point duplicates C078.
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Reference or label Footnotes 2–3 cite "Karlan and Zinman (2009)" twice, but the reference list has only Karlan & Zinman 2010a, 2010b and 2011. The Manila study is cited as (2011) in footnote 2 and as (2010), with no a/b suffix, in footnote 3.
- p. 5 Footnotes 2 and 3
This approach was pioneered by Karlan and Zinman (2009)
- p. 5 Footnote 3
case of Karlan and Zinman (2010).
- p. 38 References
Karlan, D. and J. Zinman (2010a). Expanding credit access
- p. 38 References
Karlan, D. and J. Zinman (2010a). Expanding credit access: Using randomized supply deci-
Judge's note: Checked footnotes 2–3 on the p5 image and the reference list on the p38 image: 2010a (RFS, South Africa), 2010b (Manila IPA working paper), 2011 (Science). There is no 2009 entry, and the in-text years never use the a/b suffixes.
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Reference or label Footnote 10 cites 'Dinardo, Fortin and Lemieux (2010)', but the reference list has 'DiNardo, J., N. M. Fortin, and T. Lemieux (1996)'
- p. 11 Footnote 10
inspired by Dinardo, Fortin and Lemieux (2010)
- p. 38 References
DiNardo, J., N. M. Fortin, and T. Lemieux (1996).
- p. 11 footnote 10
Dinardo, Fortin and Lemieux (2010)
- p. 38 References
DiNardo, J., N. M. Fortin, and T. Lemieux (1996)
Judge's note: Footnote 10 on page 11 gives the year as 2010. The only matching reference-list entry (page 38) is dated 1996 (Econometrica 64(5)). The capitalisation also differs: 'Dinardo' in the footnote, 'DiNardo' in the list.
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Reference or label The text says the curves "intersect the 45 degree line, OO′ at points E and E′", but in Figure 2 the point where U′U′ meets OO′ is labelled E″.
- p. 17 Section 3.2
intersect the 45 degree line, OO′ at points E and E′
- p. 40 Figure 2
Figure 2:
Judge's note: In the full Figure 2 image on p.40, the label at the U′ intersection with the 45° line, above E, reads E″ with a double prime. The text on p.17 calls it E′.
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Reference or label Section 3.4 says "as the baseline happened roughly 15 to 18 months after Spandana started its operation in each slum". It was endline 1 that was conducted 15 to 18 months after Spandana began.
- p. 20 Section 3.4
as the baseline happened roughly 15 to 18 months after Spandana started its operation in each slum
- p. 20 Section 3.4
as the baseline happened roughly 15 to 18 months after Spandana started its operation
- p. 20 Section 3.4
the baseline happened roughly 15 to 18 months after Spandana started
- p. 20
as the baseline happened roughly 15 to 18 months after Spandana
Judge's note: p.20 image. Section 2.2 (p.10) says the first endline survey was conducted at least 12 months, and generally 15 to 18 months, after Spandana began disbursing loans. The baseline (2005) came before Spandana's expansion in 2006-2007. The same sentence's first half defines the cycle as baseline to endline 1.
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Reference or label Footnote 16 says "Table A1 shows that treatment and comparison areas are balanced in terms of these characteristics" (the area-level baseline controls), but Table A1 reports endline-1 household fixed characteristics, none of which are those controls.
- p. 21 Footnote 16
Table A1 shows that treatment and comparison areas are balanced in terms of these characteristics
- p. 54 Table A1
Treatment-Control balance in fixed characteristics (Endline 1)
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Judge's note: The controls listed on p.21 are area population, total businesses, average per capita expenditure, and the literacy of heads and of adults. Table A1 (p.54) has spouse literate, spouse works for a wage, household size, prime-aged women, teens, old businesses, land, and adult labor supply. Its title is 'Endline 1'. Table 1 is the baseline-balance table (p.9 text). Only the authors can say which table was meant.
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Reference or label The text says temptation-good spending "is reduced by about Rs. 9 per family per month (column 3)", but Table 4 col 3 is under "Monthly (per capita)", and footnote 18 calls 8.73 the reduction "per capita per month".
- p. 22 Section 4.1
about Rs. 9 per family per month (column 3)
- p. 22 Footnote 18
8.73 is the reduction on temptation good spending per capita per month
- p. 46 Table 4 header
Monthly (per capita)
- p. 22 Section 4.1
reduced by about Rs. 9 per family per month (column 3)
Judge's note: Table 4 (p.46) puts col 3 (-8.73*) under 'Monthly (per capita)'. Footnote 18 multiplies 8.73 by household size 4.68 and by 12. A per-family monthly reduction would be about Rs. 41.
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Reference or label The text says "festival spending per capita in the previous year (Rs. 763", but Table 4 col 5 is under "Yearly (total)", and footnote 18 adds 763 unscaled to a per-family yearly total.
- p. 22 Section 4.1
festival spending per capita in the previous year (Rs. 763
- p. 46 Table 4 header, col 5
Yearly (total)
Judge's note: In Table 4 (p.46) Festivals (col 5, -763*) sits under 'Yearly (total)'. Footnote 18 computes 1255 = 763 + 8.73*4.68*12 per family per year, so 763 is treated as a household total.
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Reference or label The text says "there are 0.015 percentage points more female-owned businesses in treatment than in control areas, an increase of 58%". The coefficient 0.015 is per household, i.e. 1.5 per 100 households or 1.5 percentage points.
- p. 25 Section 4.2
are 0.015 percentage points more female-owned businesses
- p. 47 Table 5 col 3
0.015***
- p. 25 Section 4.2
are 0.015 percentage points more female-owned businesses in treatment than in control areas, an increase of 58%
- p. 25 Section 4.2
0.015 percentage points more female-owned businesses
Judge's note: Table 5 col 3 (p.47) shows 0.015*** with a control mean of 0.026, and 0.015/0.026 = 58%, which matches the text's percentage. A difference of 0.015 percentage points would not give 58%. This is a unit slip.
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Reference or label Table 10 note: "India results are from Banerjee et al. (2012)." The only matching reference is Banerjee, Chandrasekhar, Duflo and Jackson (2012), "The diffusion of microfinance", not the BDGK evaluation reported in the India row.
- p. 53 Table 10 notes
India results are from Banerjee et al. (2012).
- p. 37 References
Banerjee, A., A. Chandrasekhar, E. Duflo, and M. Jackson (2012). The diffusion of microfi-
- p. 37 References
Banerjee, A., A. Chandrasekhar, E. Duflo, and M. Jackson (2012). The diffusion of microfinance.
- p. 37 References
The diffusion of microfinance. MIT working paper.
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Judge's note: The reference list (p37) has only two Banerjee entries: Banerjee (2013) in the Annual Review of Economics, and Banerjee, Chandrasekhar, Duflo and Jackson (2012) on the diffusion of microfinance. The India (BDGK) row reports this paper's own Hyderabad results (e.g. 17.46% durables, 48.3% MFI). The citation therefore points to the wrong work, and the intended source (probably this paper or an earlier version of it) is not in the reference list. Only the authors can say which reference was meant.
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Reference or label Table 4 Panel B has no 'Treatment' row label, and it contains an unlabelled row of values (0.0054, 0.0065, 0.007, 0.0028 under cols 1, 2, 3, 6) that the notes do not explain.
- p. 46 Table 4 Panel B
0.0054
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Judge's note: Visible in the p.46 upright image: Panel A labels its coefficient row 'Treatment', but Panel B does not, and an extra row sits below the SEs. Its meaning cannot be determined from the paper.
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Reference or label Table 6: column 4 'Has any employees?' shows control mean/SD 0.42/1.74 (EL1) and 0.56/2.93 (EL2), impossible for a binary variable; column 5 'Num. of employees' shows 0.12/0.33 and 0.13/0.34, consistent with a binary indicator. The column labels appear swapped.
- p. 48 Table 6 cols 4-5, control mean and stdev
0.42 0.12 / 1.74 0.33
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Judge's note: Checked the p.48 image. A binary variable's SD is at most 0.5, and sqrt(0.12*0.88) is about 0.325, matching the 0.33 in column 5. Table 7 shows the expected pattern. The coefficients may also be affected; only the authors can say which.
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Reference or label Table 10, India, col 16 (labor supply own business): "Endline 1: increase of 11% (p<.05)", but Table 8 Panel A col 3 gives 2.78* (1.48), marked significant at the 10% level only.
- p. 53 Table 10 India row col 16
11% (p<.05)
- p. 50 Table 8 Panel A col 3
2.78*
Judge's note: The magnitude matches the same estimate (2.78/25.8 is about 11%). The t-ratio of about 1.88 is consistent with Table 8's single star, not p<.05. Column 15's p<0.05 matches Table 8 col 1 (3.22**). Checked both images.
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Wording Conclusion reads "the average new business in a microcredit treatment area less likely to have an employee" (missing 'is'), "this decrease in not due to a few" ('is') and "in the short run .". The introduction says "The median marginal new business is both less profitable and less likely to have even one employee", although the employee result is a mean.
- p. 6 Introduction
The me- dian marginal new business is both less profitable and less likely to have even one employee
- p. 36 Conclusion
we find that the average new business in a microcredit treatment area less likely to have an employee
- p. 36 Conclusion
this decrease in not due to a few
- p. 36 Conclusion
business in a microcredit treatment area less likely to have an employee
Judge's note: The p36 image shows all three conclusion typos. The p6 image shows the introduction sentence. Section 4.2 (main.txt l.895–900) says the median result is for profits (Table 7 col 2) and that the 'average new business' is less likely to have employees (col 5), so 'median' in the introduction misdescribes the employee result.
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Wording Table A2 note (1): "Panel B presents the coefficient from regressing a dummy for 'attrited between endline 1 and endline 2' on various endline 1 characteristics". The coefficients (e.g. 130.9*** for exp per capita, next to a non-attriter mean of 1423.2) are characteristic differences, i.e. each characteristic regressed on the attrition dummy.
- p. 55 Table A2 note (1)
Panel B presents the coefficient from regressing a dummy for "attrited between endline 1 and endline 2" on various endline
- p. 10 Section 2.2
higher per capita expenditure at endline 1, by Rs. 131 (column 1)
Judge's note: In the p55 image, Panel B is labelled 'Attrited' with a 'Non-attriter mean' row, and the coefficients are in the units of each characteristic (Rs, shares). The text on p10 reads the coefficient as attritors having 'higher per capita expenditure at endline 1, by Rs. 131'. The note describes the regression in the reverse direction.
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Wording Second-period consumption with the durable is written "δu(y+cd−rb)" (p.18) and "δ[u(y + cd −rb + wl2) −v(l2)" (p.19) instead of y+acd−rb. The p.19 expression also has no closing bracket.
- p. 18 Derivative of vd
δu(y+cd−rb)
- p. 19 Labor-supply objective
δ[u(y + cd −rb + wl2) −v(l2)
- p. 18 Section 3.2 derivative equation
u′(y+b)−δru(y−rb)
- p. 18 Section 3.2 derivative
δu(y+cd−rb)]
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Judge's note: On p.18 the expression inside the d/db bracket reads δu(y+c_d−rb), while its derivative on the same line reads δru′(y+ac_d−rb). Point A on p.17 is (y−(1−a)cd, y+acd), and the appendix (p.59) uses y+acd−rb. On p.19 the labor-supply objective again has y+c_d−rb+wl2, and its bracket is not closed; the companion line closes with ']'. Reworked: the right-hand side derivative is correct for y+acd, so the factor a is dropped only in the objective. The result stands, hence S3. The missing prime and the duplicated words are judged under C034 and C035.
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Wording The derivative of v_n is printed "max{u′(y+b)−δru(y−rb), 0}"; the second term should be δru′(y−rb).
- p. 18 Section 3.2
max{u′(y+b)−δru(y−rb), 0}
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Judge's note: Reworked: d/db[u(y+b)+δu(y−rb)] = u′(y+b) − δr u′(y−rb). The page image on p.18 shows u without a prime in the second term, whereas the v_d derivative on the same page has u′. This is a typographical slip in a derivation step, and the stated result stands.
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Wording Conclusion (p.36): "We see households invest in home durable goods and restrict their consumption of temptation goods and expenditures on festivals and parties. They continue to do so several years later" — but Table 4 Panel B (endline 2) shows durables 62 (524), festivals +205 (205), temptation goods -9.99 (6.64), not significant.
- p. 36 Conclusion, para 4
They continue to do so several years later
- p. 46 Table 4 Panel B cols 4–5
62
- p. 23 Section 4.1
The effect on festivals is now positive but nowhere near being significant.
- p. 46 Table 4 Panel B
-9.99
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Judge's note: Checked the conclusion crop, the Section 4.1 crop (p.23) and Table 4 on p.46. Section 4.1 itself says the festival effect "is now positive but nowhere near being significant", that the gap "has shrunk", and that "there is no difference on average in durable goods spending in endline 2". Only the temptation-goods point estimate stays negative, and it is not significant. So 'continue to do so' overstates persistence for the three categories it refers to. This is a wording issue; the authors should qualify the sentence.
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Wording The text says "an increase of Rs. 357 per month in business revenues", but 357 is the business profits coefficient (Table 5 col 11); the revenue coefficient (col 9) is 920.
- p. 25 Section 4.2
increase of Rs. 357 per month in business revenues
- p. 47 Table 5 col 11
357
- p. 25 Section 4.2
an increase of Rs. 357 per month in business revenues
- p. 47 Table 5 col 11
Business profits
Judge's note: Table 5 (p.47) Panel A shows col 9 Business revenue = 920 and col 11 Business profits = 357. Earlier in the same paragraph on p.25, 357 is called profits.
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Wording Text (p.33): increase in durable goods purchases "is not present in any of the other studies except AADFH", but Table 10 col 6 (home-use durable purchase) for Mongolia (AADFH) reads "negative insig".
- p. 33 Section 5
which is not present in any of the other studies except AADFH
- p. 53 Table 10 Mongolia col 6
negative insig
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Judge's note: Checked Table 10 continuation (upright p.53): the Mongolia col 6 entry is 'negative insig'. The later sentence on AADFH ownership of VCRs etc. concerns stocks, not purchases in the last year. Text and table disagree, and only the authors can say which is right.
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Wording Text (p.33): "In all studies except CDDP, this expansion does not translate into significantly higher profit on average", but Table 10 col 10 (mean profit) lists Morocco (CDDP) as "positive, insig".
- p. 33 Section 5
In all studies except CDDP, this expansion does not translate into significantly higher profit on average.
- p. 52 Table 10 Morocco col 10
positive, insig
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Judge's note: Table 10 col 10 (pp.52–53): Bosnia positive insig, Mexico negative insig, Morocco positive insig, Mongolia negative insig, India positive insig. No study, CDDP included, shows a significant mean-profit effect in the table, so the exception for CDDP is not supported by the paper's own summary.
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Wording Appendix 1 states "y2 ∈ (y + acd, y + acd + b)", but the term it comes from is δ[u(y+acd−rb) − u(y+acd+b)] = −δ(b+rb)u′(y2), so the mean value theorem gives y2 ∈ (y+acd−rb, y+acd+b).
- p. 59 Appendix 1, mean value theorem
y2 ∈ (y + acd, y + acd + b)
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Judge's note: Reworked on the p59 image. The two arguments are y+acd−rb and y+acd+b, separated by b+rb, which matches the printed coefficient δ(b+rb). The lower bound of the interval is therefore y+acd−rb, not y+acd. The next step, 'y2 ≥ y1 (because b<cd)', follows from the printed interval: y+acd ≥ y+b−(1−a)cd iff cd ≥ b. With the correct interval it needs y+acd−rb ≥ y+b−(1−a)cd, i.e. cd ≥ (1+r)b, which b<cd does not imply. The step as written is faulty and needs an extra condition or argument. The stated conclusion may still hold under such a condition.
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Substance The text says 'Forty-two percent of working individuals worked for a wage', but Table 1 gives 0.410 (treatment) and 0.407 (control)
- p. 12 Section 2.3
Forty-two percent of working individuals worked for a wage.
- p. 43 Table 1, Working for a wage
0.410
Only the authors can say what is right here.
Judge's note: Any pooled value must lie between 0.407 and 0.410, which rounds to 41%, not 42%. The Table 1 row does not state its denominator, so a different base population cannot be fully excluded; hence a query to the authors. The gap is 1 percentage point.
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Substance Table 2: 'Household is owner' 0.754 / 0.644 with Difference -0.113 (subtraction gives -0.110); 'Loan from moneylender' 0.264 / 0.231 with Difference -0.031 (subtraction gives -0.033).
- p. 44 Table 2
Household is owner 0.754 0.644 -0.113
- p. 44 Table 2
Loan from moneylender 0.264 0.231 -0.031
- p. 44 Table 2, Panel A, Household is owner
0.754 0.644 -0.113
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Judge's note: Verified in the p.44 image. The other rows reconcile to within 0.001 (rounding), so gaps of 0.003 and 0.002 are not rounding. The differences may come from regressions on slightly different samples (the Obs counts differ slightly by row), but the table notes do not say so. The discrepancies are small, so this is rated minor.
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Wording Abstract says "We found no changes in any of the development outcomes ... including health, education" and the introduction says "We do not find any effect on any of the women's empowerment or human development outcomes either after 18 or 36 months", but Table 4 Panel B shows education fees 88** and health -130* at endline 2, and Section 4.4 and the conclusion discuss both.
- p. 2 Abstract
We found no changes in any of the development outcomes
- p. 7 Introduction
We do not find any effect on any of the women’s empowerment or human development outcomes either after 18 or 36 months.
- p. 46 Table 4 Panel B cols 8, 10
-130*
- p. 31 Section 4.4
there is by endline 2 a significant difference in how much is spent on private school fees
Only the authors can say what is right here.
Judge's note: Table 4 Panel B (p46 upright) prints col 8 Health -130* (75) and col 10 Education fees 88** (42). Section 4.4 (p31) reports a significant difference in private school fees and a fall in health spending, and calls them possible statistical accidents because the overall index is not significant. The conclusion (p36) also mentions an 'apparent increase' in school fees and an 'apparent decline' in health. So the blanket 'any' wording in the abstract and introduction overstates the results as reported. The paper does give a rationale in Section 4.4, which is why this is wording-level.
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Wording Pairs are said to be formed "based on average per capita consumption and per-household debt" (footnote 8: avg loan balance and per capita consumption), but the next paragraph says "the sample was stratified according to per capita consumption, fraction of households with debt, and fraction of households who had a business".
- p. 9 Section 2.2
based on average per capita consumption and per-household debt
- p. 9 Section 2.2
stratified according to per capita consumption, fraction of households with debt, and fraction of households who had a business
- p. 9 Footnote 8
area A avg loan balance
Only the authors can say what is right here.
Judge's note: Checked on the p9 image. The main text and footnote 8 agree, since debt per household is the same as average loan balance. The later sentence names different variables (share of households with debt, share with a business), and the text does not explain whether the stratification differed from the pairing.
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Wording Section 3.1 says "The consumer does not discount and the future and therefore maximizes total of present and future utility". Yet a discount factor δ appears in every objective (p.17: slope 1/δ, r<1/δ), and the appendix bound bu′(y1)[1−δ−δr+δ²r] > 0 "as long as δr < 1" needs δ<1.
- p. 16 Section 3.1
The consumer does not discount and the future
- p. 17 Section 3.2
They both have slope 1/δ
- p. 59 Appendix 1
as long as δr < 1
Only the authors can say what is right here.
Judge's note: I viewed pp.16, 17 and 59. The text states no discounting, but δ is used throughout: Fig. 2 marks δ, the text contrasts r<1/δ with rδ>1, and the appendix uses δ and δ². In the appendix, 1−δ−δr+δ²r factors as (1−δ)(1−δr). This is zero when δ=1, so the strict inequality needs δ<1 as well as δr<1, which contradicts the stated assumption. The sentence also has the stray words 'and the future' and 'total of'. The main results do not depend on this, so S3.
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Wording Section 4.1 says "labor supply increases by 3.23 hours per week", but Table 8 Panel A col 1 prints 3.22** and Section 4.3 says "3.22 hours".
- p. 22 Section 4.1
3.23 hours per week
- p. 28 Section 4.3
by an average of 3.22 hours
- p. 50 Table 8 Panel A col 1
3.22**
- p. 22 Section 4.1
labor supply increases by 3.23 hours per week
Judge's note: The p.22 main text (not a footnote) has 3.23. Table 8 on p.50 shows 3.22**, and p.28 has 3.22. These are the same estimate, so the two figures differ by 0.01.
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Wording Footnote 17: "a Rs. 113 (10/.088) or 5% increase, and for non-durable it is a Rs. 75 (4%) decrease". On the control means the main text uses (1419.2, 1304.8), these are about 8% and 5.7%.
- p. 22 Footnote 17
a Rs. 113 (10/.088) or 5% increase, and for non-durable it is a Rs. 75 (4%) decrease
- p. 22 Footnote 17
Rs. 113 (10/.088) or 5% increase, and for non-durable it is a Rs. 75 (4%) decrease
- p. 46 Table 4 Panel A control means
1419.2 1304.8
Only the authors can say what is right here.
Judge's note: The main text (pp.21-22) gives Rs. 85 as about 6% and Rs. 56 as 4%, which match 85/1419.2 and 56/1304.8. Applying the same bases to 113 and 75 gives 8.0% and 5.7%, not 5% and 4%. No other base is stated. The rupee figures themselves (10.1/.088, 6.6/.088) check out.
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Wording The text says the implied increase per additional borrower "would be more than twice the level of durable goods spending in comparison areas". On the printed figures, 1154/0.088 is about 13,114, which is 1.98 times the control mean of 6,609.
- p. 24 Section 4.1
be more than twice the level of durable goods spending in comparison areas
- p. 46 Table 4 col 4
6609
Judge's note: Inputs: 1154 from p.23 and Table 4 col 4, 8.8% from p.23, and the control mean 6609 from Table 4. The same page says 1154 is about 17% of control spending, and 17/8.8 is also below 2. Even taking 8.8% at its lower rounding bound of 8.75%, the ratio stays below 2. 'About twice' would be accurate.
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Wording Section 4.2 says "Spandana loans only to women", while Section 5 says "Spandana, while it lends to both, does not insist that the loan is to finance a woman's business".
- p. 24 Section 4.2
Consistent with the fact that Spandana loans only to women
- p. 34 Section 5
Spandana, while it lends to both
- p. 34 Section 5, last para
Spandana, while it lends to both,
Only the authors can say what is right here.
Judge's note: p.24 and p.34 images. Footnote 6 says men are eligible for individual-liability loans, which were introduced in 2007 and were very rare in the sample, and that 96.5% of borrowers are female. Each statement is defensible in its own way, but as written they contradict each other. Only the authors can say whether p.34 meant 'lends to women'.
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Wording Text (p.26) says the median new-business profit effect of Rs. 1250 is "significant at the 5% level (Table 7, column 2)", but Table 7 col 2 prints "-1250***" (404), i.e. 1% under the table note.
- p. 26 Section 4.2
significant at the 5% level (Table
- p. 49 Table 7 column 2
-1250***
- p. 26 Section 4.2
significant at the 5% level (Table 7, column 2)
Judge's note: Page 26 text and the upright Table 7 image (p.49) both checked. Table note (5) defines *** as 1%. Coefficient/SE ≈ 3.09, which fits ***. The text's statement is weaker than, but not literally contradicted by, the table; the stated level does not match the table's convention.
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Wording Text (p.27): food-business share "is 8.5 percentage points (about 45%) higher" among new treatment businesses; Table A3 gives 0.299 vs 0.214 (diff 0.085), about 40% relative to the control share.
- p. 27 Section 4.2
is 8.5 percentage points (about 45%) higher
- p. 56 Table A3 Food/agriculture
0.214
- p. 27 Section 4.2
8.5 percentage points (about 45%)
- p. 56 Table A3
0.299 0.214 0.085*
Judge's note: Table A3 (p.56) cols 4–6: food/agriculture 0.299, 0.214, 0.085*. 0.085/0.214 = 39.7%; against the treatment share 28%. No base yields about 45%. The rickshaw part of the reviewers' notes is handled in C048.
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Wording Text (p.30) describes Table 9 cols 5–6 as "the probability that children or teenagers are enrolled in school", but col 5 'Girls' education' has control mean 1.21 (SD 0.84) and col 6 has mean 0.83 with SD 0.64, so neither can be a probability.
- p. 30 Section 4.4
no change in the probability that children or teenagers are enrolled in
- p. 51 Table 9 col 5
1.21
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Judge's note: Table 9 (p.51): col 5 control means are 1.21 (EL1) and 1.2 (EL2), which are above 1. For col 6, a binary variable with mean 0.83 would have SD at most about 0.38, not 0.64. Both outcomes therefore look like counts, but the outcome definition is not stated. Footnote 26 lists 'teenage girls' and teenage boys' school enrollment', while the col 5 note says girls aged 4–18.
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Wording Text (p.31) says the four other RCTs report results "at the time of the first follow-up (after up to two years)", but Table 10 lists the Mexico (AKZ) follow-up as "2-3 years".
- p. 31 Section 5, last para
follow-up (after up to two years)
- p. 52 Table 10, Mexico col 1
2-3 years
Judge's note: Table 10 col 1 (upright p.52) gives Bosnia 14 months, Mexico 2-3 years and Morocco 2 years; Mongolia is 1.5 years (p.53). 'Up to two years' is exceeded by the Mexico entry. This is a minor wording inconsistency.
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Wording Text (p.33) says of spending on festivals and parties "(which we also find–the other studies don’t report this outcome)", yet Table 10 col 5 for Mexico (AKZ) reports "negative insig for spending on family events".
- p. 33 Section 5
the other studies don’t report this outcome
- p. 52 Table 10 Mexico col 5
negative insig for spending on family events
- p. 33 Section 5, para 2
(which we also find–the other studies don’t report this outcome)
Judge's note: Table 10 col 5 (upright p.52), Mexico entry: '-5.91% (p<0.05) on amount spent on temptation goods; negative insig for spending on family events'. 'Family events' is a close analogue placed in the same column, so 'don't report' is at least loosely worded.
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Wording Text (p.34) says the upper-tail profit increase is "positive and significant ... in all three studies that report it", but Table 10 col 12 gives Morocco (CDDP) as "increase of 2.3; 57.57% (p<0.15)".
- p. 34 Section 5
in all three studies that report it
- p. 52 Table 10 Morocco col 12
(p<0.15)
- p. 34 Section 5, first para
positive and significant in profit increase in profits the upper tail of businesses (90th or 95th percentile) in all three studies
- p. 52 Table 10, Morocco col 12
57.57% (p<0.15)
Judge's note: Table 10 col 12: Mexico 'positive, sig (p<10), value not specified'; Morocco p<0.15; India insig at endline 1 and 20% (p<.05) at endline 2; Bosnia and Mongolia N.A. A p<0.15 result is not significant under the 10/5/1% convention used in the paper's tables, so 'significant in all three' overstates it.
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Wording Text (p.34): "AHHM and AADFH do not even report the effects" on women's empowerment, but Table 10 col 13 (Women's empowerment) for Mongolia (AADFH) reports "increase of 16.20% (p<0.10) in the probability of female business".
- p. 34 Section 5, para 2
AHHM and AADFH do not even report the effects
- p. 53 Table 10, Mongolia col 13 (Women's empowerment)
increase of 16.20% (p<0.10) in the probability of female business
Judge's note: On upright p.53 the Mongolia col 13 entry is filled in, and Bosnia is N.A. The text and table disagree on whether AADFH reports an empowerment outcome. Female business ownership may be a weak empowerment measure, but the authors placed it in that column.
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Wording Table 9 col 4 (Child's major illness, restricted to households with children 0-18): Nobs 3943 at endline 1 but 5942 at endline 2 (out of 6142), while cols 5 and 6 shrink between endlines.
- p. 51 Table 9 col 4 Nobs
3943 / 5942
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Judge's note: Checked the p.51 image. Note (3) gives the same restriction for both panels. The share of households with children rises from 3943/6855 to 5942/6142 even though cohorts age, and the paper gives no explanation (the text mentions the illness outcome only at line ~1018). It may be a typo or a different coverage; the authors should clarify.
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Wording Table A3 col 2 (old business, control) industry shares 0.243, 0.186, 0.103, 0.052, 0.029, 0.380 sum to 0.993, while the other share columns sum to 0.999–1.000.
- p. 56 Table A3 col 2
0.380
- p. 56 Table A3 col 2
0.243 0.186 0.103 0.052 0.029 0.380
Only the authors can say what is right here.
Judge's note: Checked on the p56 image. Col 1 sums to 0.999 and cols 4 and 5 to 1.000. Col 3 differences sum to 0.005, which agrees with col1 minus col2, so this does not look like a single mistyped cell. It may reflect unclassified businesses or weighting, but nothing in the note explains it. Only the authors can say.
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Wording Appendix 1: "four possible scenarios; in one she buys the durable in both period 2m+1 and 2m+3, one in which she borrows in neither and one each where she buys the durable in one of those two periods". The enumeration is over durable purchases, so 'borrows in neither' should be 'buys the durable in neither'.
- p. 58 Appendix 1
one in which she borrows in neither
Judge's note: Read on the p58 image. The four cases (both / neither / one each) only partition the possibilities if all refer to durable purchase. The passage has already fixed that she borrows in 2m+2 and not in 2m+3.
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Wording Appendix 2, Business revenues: "The respondent was asked to list inputs one by one." This is in the revenue paragraph, where items sold are meant.
- p. 60 Appendix 2, Business revenues
The respondent was asked to list inputs one by one.
Judge's note: The p60 image shows this sentence in the revenues paragraph. The p61 inputs paragraph has the same sentence, which suggests it was copied across.
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Typo Acknowledgment footnote reads "Funding for the second wage was provided by Spandana and J-PAL"; 'wave' is intended (cf. 'first wave of the survey').
- p. 1 Acknowledgment footnote
Funding for the second
- p. 1 cover note
Funding for the second wage was provided by Spandana and J-PAL
- p. 1
wage was provided by Spandana and J-PAL
Judge's note: Seen in the page 1 image. The sentence before it says 'first wave of the survey', so 'wage' is a typo for 'wave'.
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Typo Acknowledgment footnote reads "This draft was not reviewed by the The Vanguard Charitable Endowment Program" (article doubled).
- p. 1 Acknowledgment footnote
reviewed by the The Vanguard Charitable
- p. 1
This draft was not reviewed by the The Vanguard Charitable
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Typo Typos: Table 10 "Spadana", "postivie" and "results are form Crépon"; "Panel A: endine 1" / "Panel B: endine 2" in the table panel labels; "second wage was provided" (acknowledgements); "worth nothing that all endlines" (Section 5).
- p. 53 Table 10 India col 2
Spadana
- p. 53 Table 10, India col 12
postive
- p. 53 Table 10 note (1)
Morocco results are form Crépon
- p. 53 Table 10 India row
from Spadana
Judge's note: All of these appear in the page images: the Table 10 India row and notes (p53), the Table 4/5 panel labels showing 'endine' (p46, p47), the acknowledgement crop showing 'second wage' and 'the The Vanguard', and the p33 crop showing 'worth nothing'. All are cosmetic.
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Typo Introduction reads "In 2006, Mohammad Yunus and the Grameen Bank were awarded the Nobel Prize for Peace"; the laureate's usual spelling is 'Muhammad'.
- p. 3 Introduction, para 2
Mohammad Yunus
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Judge's note: Rests on outside knowledge: the standard/Nobel spelling of the laureate's name is 'Muhammad Yunus'. The page 3 image shows 'Mohammad'. Transliterations vary, so this is cosmetic.
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Typo Stray doubled full stops: "alternative forms of borrowing. . In all cases" (p14) and "almost unchanged from endline 1. . The key difference" (p15). The p4 instance ('not others.') shows only a wide space, not a second period.
- p. 4 Introduction
purposely choose some villages and not others. .
- p. 14 Section 2.4
alternative forms of borrowing. .
- p. 15 Section 2.4
almost unchanged from endline 1. .
Judge's note: The p14 crop and the p15 full page both show '. .'. On p4 the image has a single period followed by a large gap, so that part of the finding is a text-layer artefact.
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Typo Introduction reads "the Indian state were microcredit has expanded the fastest"; should be 'where'.
- p. 5 Introduction
the Indian state were microcredit has expanded
- p. 5 Introduction
the Indian state were microcredit has expanded the fastest
- p. 5 Introduction, para 3
the Indian state were microcredit has expanded the
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Typo Introduction has number-agreement errors: "in their slums areas" and "the probability of receiving an MFI loans".
- p. 5 Introduction
in their slums areas
- p. 5 Introduction
the probability of receiving an MFI loans
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Typo Introduction reads "We examine the effect consumption" (missing 'on') and "reduced expenditures on what that they themselves describe" (extra word).
- p. 6 Introduction
We examine the effect consumption
- p. 6 Introduction
reduced expenditures on what that they
- p. 6 Introduction
what that they themselves describe
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Typo The text cites 'Appendix Table 2' (p.8) and 'Appendix Table 3' (p.25), but the tables are titled 'Table A2' and 'Table A3', and the text cites 'Table A1' elsewhere
- p. 10 Section 2.2
Appendix Table 2, Panel A shows
- p. 10 Section 2.2
B shows average characteristics of the recontacted versus attrited households
- p. 55 Table title
Table A2: Endline 2 Attrition
Judge's note: The naming is inconsistent but the intended tables are easy to identify. The reviewer's claims of an 'Appendix B' reference and a stray 'B' are not supported: the page 10 image reads 'Panel B shows average characteristics', with nothing extra (a misreading of the text layer). Grep for 'Appendix' confirms 'Appendix Table 3' on page 27.
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Typo Table A1 note says "Cluster-robust standard errors in brackets." but the table prints the standard errors in parentheses, e.g. (0.021).
- p. 54 Table A1 note
Cluster-robust standard errors in brackets.
- p. 10 Section 2.2
Appendix Table 2, Panel A
Judge's note: The p54 upright image shows parentheses throughout Table A1, whereas Table A3 does use square brackets. The text's 'Appendix Table 2' vs the label 'A2' is a minor labelling inconsistency, and the pointer still resolves.
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Typo Footnote 10 reads 'possibly for endine 1 as well'; 'endine' should be 'endline'
- p. 11 footnote 10
possibly for endine 1 as well
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Typo Misplaced full stop: 'Rs. 11,497 (all expressed in 2007 rupees). in EL2.'
- p. 12 Growth between 2005 and 2010
Rs. 11,497 (all expressed in 2007 rupees). in EL2
Judge's note: The page 12 image shows the stray full stop followed by a lower-case 'in EL2.'
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Typo 'The fairly low take up rate in these difference contexts is in itself is a perhaps surprising result': 'is' is duplicated and 'difference' should be 'different'
- p. 14 Section 2.4
in these difference contexts is in itself is a perhaps surprising
- p. 14
is in itself is a perhaps surprising
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Typo There are duplicated words in "which tells us that if is tells us that if at any level of b^max".
- p. 18 Section 3.2
which tells us that if is tells us that if
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Typo Text (p.27): rickshaw/driving share among new treatment businesses "is 5.4 (more than 50%) percentage points lower"; Table A3 gives 0.056 vs 0.110, a 49% relative drop.
- p. 27 Section 4.2
is 5.4 (more than 50%) percentage points lower
- p. 56 Table A3 Rickshaw/driving
0.110
- p. 56 Table A3 Rickshaw/driving, new businesses
0.056 0.110 -0.054*
Judge's note: Table A3 (p.56): 0.056, 0.110, -0.054*. 0.054/0.110 = 49.1%, just under rather than 'more than' 50%. The placement of '(more than 50%)' inside '5.4 ... percentage points' is also awkward. The difference is small.
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Typo Copy-editing errors in Section 5: "it is worth nothing" (noting), "CDDP reports a increase" (an), "evaluation of a EKI" (an), "since they it used", "increase in in hours", and the garbled "positive and significant in profit increase in profits the upper tail".
- p. 33 Section 5
it is worth nothing that all endlines
- p. 33 Section 5
CDDP reports a increase
- p. 32 Section 5
since they it used
- p. 34 Section 5
significant increase in in hours worked
Judge's note: All verified on the page images: p.32 ('a EKI', 'they it'), p.33 ('worth nothing', 'a increase') and p.34 ('in in', garbled upper-tail sentence). These are cosmetic.
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Typo Missing word on p.34: "hours worked overall in any these studies" (any of these). This overlaps with C055's 'in in' and 'they it'.
- p. 34 Section 5
significant increase in in hours worked
- p. 34 Section 5
in any these studies
- p. 32 Section 5
since they it used an oversubscription-type design
- p. 34
finds a significant increase in in hours worked
Judge's note: Verified on the C058-b crop (p.34). 'in in' (p.34) and 'they it' (p.32) are also present but are already covered under C055; this cluster adds 'any these'. Cosmetic.
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Typo Conclusion (p.36): "this decrease in not due to" should read "is not due to", and "the average new business in a microcredit treatment area less likely to have an employee" is missing "is".
- p. 36 Conclusion
this de- crease in not due to
- p. 36 Conclusion
treatment area less likely to have an employee
- p. 36
this de- crease in not due to a few particularly virtuous households
Judge's note: Both typos are visible in the page-image crops of p.36.
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Typo The Table 2 notes end mid-sentence: "See Appendix 2 for variable" (presumably 'definitions' is missing).
- p. 44 Table 2 notes
See Appendix 2 for variable
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Typo Table panel headings read "Panel A: endine 1" / "Panel B: endine 2" (misspelling of 'endline') in Tables 3, 4, 5, 6 and 9.
- p. 45 Table 3
Panel A: endine 1
- p. 47 Table 5
Panel B: endine 2
Judge's note: Seen on the page images of Table 4 (p.46), Table 6 (p.48) and Table 9 (p.51). The text layer shows the same spelling in Tables 3 and 5.
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Typo Table 10, Mexico, col 12 (profit 90th percentile): "positive, sig (p<10)" should read p<.10.
- p. 52 Table 10 Mexico col 12
(p<10)
Judge's note: Visible on the p.52 upright image. Elsewhere the table uses forms such as p<.10 or p<0.10.
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Typo Table A2 note (2): "whether the characteristics of th attritors is different" ('th' for 'the'; 'characteristics ... is').
- p. 55 Table A2 note (2)
characteristics of th attritors is different
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Typo Appendix 2 typos: "make and changes" (twice, for 'make any changes'), "purchased five saris this months", "Maharastra".
- p. 60 Business revenues
make and changes
- p. 61 Business inputs
make and changes
- p. 61 Expenditure
Maharastra
- p. 60 Business inputs
purchased five saris this months
Judge's note: All are visible on the p60 image and the p61 crops. The spelling 'Maharashtra' rests on outside knowledge of the state's name. The 'list inputs' point is covered in C087.
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